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When you're lost,
cling to me.
Through these shadows,
this light can burn so brightly.
I'll hold you up,
through this terrifying storm.
It's okay now,
you don't have to be alone.
The Winter sun,
pours through these faded windows,
I can see your pain..
it's almost like you won't ever be happy again.
But I can be your pedastal,
I'll lift you up when the world is cruel.
And even if you can't show me the same,
I'll survive this constant pain.
It's like the walls are caving in,
and I have this feeling under my skin,
that life, it ain't getting any easier,
and your hand has pulled back
and you're pulling away..
Like I don't exsist in your world
I wasn't meant to stay.
Nothing is the same anymore,
we are both moving on.
This change is killing everything I thought was true,
but most of all... it's killing the you I once knew!
©2008-2009 *devils-horizon
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Author's Comments

My best friend is everything to me. I have so many self-destructive throughts right now and I wish wish wish I could talk to her like we used to. This is for her. x

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»» edit :: editted out some minor spelling mistakes and changed the second to last line from "This change is killing everything I ever knew" to "This change is killing everything I ever thought was true" so as not to clash with the last word in thep poem.

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If I find this being used anywhere, the rikku that many people once knew and hated will return and i will chew your sticky fingers off until they are bleeding stumps! UNDERSTAND!!!!??

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:icono--tebem--o:
Sad and beautiful. I know it says Critique Not Desired, but I just wanted to let you know that I read it, and I think you did a good job at conveying the raw emotion that you must be feeling. I cant tell exactly what is going on with you and your best friend, but I really hope your life turns around for the better =) :hug:

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:iconhelsinkithegreat:
o_o
hocrap
that was awesome.
:iconchristi-chan:
As soon as I read this I knew it had to be about you and your best friend. It makes me want to cry almost because it almost reminds me of me and my bff. We're drifting apart, we're both mothers and working and such. I try not to think about it because I may just cry.

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:iconuntamed-reflection:
thats a tear jurker.

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:iconchamber123890:
I know how that feels... and unfortunately only time will close that wound... but hopefully - for you, it will close perfectly and you'll cease to feel this sadness. :hug:
:iconborn-from-pain:
If you need someone to talk to
just send a note :hug:

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:iconmelancholy-delilah:
awww this is so beautiful.....i love it :hug: i'm sorry you have to suffer those dark feelings though

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The faint blaze of the candle of my life,
slowly dying like a fire in pouring rain.
No sparks of hope inside,
no shooting stars on my sky.
On broken wings, no flying high...
:iconbooyakashin:
*sniffles* one of my best friends and mu sub-best friends tore away from me recently and they ain't coming back...I hope you feel better soon :glomp:

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:iconshadehkins:
This totally sums up how I'm feeling about my best friend right now, babe. It hurts like crazy, but I just don't know what to do anymore. :hug: We must be sisters from another mister. It's too much of a coincidence for both of us to be going through such similar situations!

Thanks so much for posting this. You said it so much more eloquently than I ever could!


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